The Complexities of Arckon

[Arckon]

Re: The Complexities of Arckon

poem #7
Can I keep it going
Can I keep from knowing
Can I live without wind of this
Can I keep this up, for the one I miss

This I don't know
This I can't show
This I can do
I can just keep waiting for you

Am I ready to give up, no
Am I ready for the towel to throw
once again no

You run father away
but the truth is "Nothing gold can stay" (<Robert Frost)
I come closer but you run
Are you doing this to hurt me or are you having fun

Why must this continue, the endless wait
I guess patience isn't my best trait
Why must this happen, why must you keep me away from you
why must this happen, Fates aim must be true

 

[blu phoenix]

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Oh my...Hi. I know it's been a long time and I have missed you, all of you. Still gifted at poetry. I'm so sorry to say and I don't think you'll(or anyone) will ever forgive me, but so much has happened to me and it's hard for me...

If you're still on...then hi and again beautiful poems.

 

[Arckon]

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It is hard to stay mad at some one I have been expecting for a long time now.

 

[blu phoenix]

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Hey, still I do feel bad and so much has changed around here.

 

[Arckon]

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Aye much has changed
Even I have felt the tight knot of school
School is extremely cruel
especialy on the mind
for harder work than school is extremelyhard to find

 

[blu phoenix]

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Yeah, although now I'm out of school and on summer vacation so I'll be on.

Anyways I still can't rhyme....

 

[Arckon]

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Anyone can rhyme
but rhyming is a waste of time
true poetry is in the message not the text
that was your second lesson are you ready for the next

btw happy belated birthday

 

[blu phoenix]

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Thank you, wow not even some of my friends can remember my birthday.

Anyways....you've written what nine poems so far?

 

[Arckon]

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I think so, don't feel like counting

 

[blu phoenix]

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Been in any competitions or anything like that?

 

[Arckon]

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For this forum yes, but I haven't been in any other compititions since you left, btw I made it to the semi finals, and I made junur(spelling) poet of the year

 

[blu phoenix]

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Wow, that's impressive, congrats!

 

[Arckon]

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thnx, so you like the active forums now?

 

[droded]

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I'm new, why shouldn't people forgive blu?

 

[Arckon]

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She think just because she's been away for so long that weare mad and she understands if we dont fogive her I think thats what she ment, but thats just silly, I have been forgiven so she can be too.

 

[droded]

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How can you tell...?

 

[blu phoenix]

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Yeah, the forums are different, but definitely awesome! Some great people here.

Oh and droded, it's only because I left without ever saying goodbye and well I felt bad. Thanks though.

 

[Arckon]

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How can you tell...?

I think I've known her long enough to tell the tone of her text, but blu there is no reason to feel bad, after all I did the same thing.

 

[blu phoenix]

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I think I've known her long enough to tell the tone of her text, but blu there is no reason to feel bad, after all I did the same thing.

You did? When?

Oh yeah...droded me and Arc go way back.

 

[Arckon]

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from september to january