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The Four Heroes!
ok this is my first fan-fic so i thought is wud be fun and this isn't going by the actual game so no point in correcting my mistakes cus it's a fan-fic.Please note that i made a mistake in the name of my thread and can't change it now.the mistake was that there is more than 4 heroes in my story.
Chapter 1:The First Hero is Born!
One day Guill a.k.a the first hero was wandering the roads of Brightwood with his side-kick dog which he liked to call Tobi.He brought Tobi with him everywhere he goes and Tobi always obeys him.Guill and Tobi wandered off into the forest after leaving his house which was in Brightwood.
His mother had told him not to wander off but like always Guill wanders off anyways because he likes to go out on adventures like his father did when he was a hero.Anyways after Guill and Tobi go into the forest they get a surprise ambush attack by a group of bandits.But Guill wasn't scared because he had his dog Tobi with him and he knew Tobi would never run off without him.
But sadly Tobi was too scared to run run away.Guill thought Tobi and him were goners but then just when it looked like there was no hope for them Guill's mother had killed all the bandits in a split second.Guill was frozen scared and then his mother said:"Are you ok Guill?".
Guill was too shocked to answer but he was proud of his mother.From that day forward Guill promised Rose his mother that he would train harder and never leave her sight again.Later in Guill's life he made the "Guild" which was a place for heroes to do lots of things ordinary people couldn't do and then Guill became known as the Guildmaster.
Please post your comments.
And tell me what you thought about it.
ok this is my first fan-fic so i thought is wud be fun and this isn't going by the actual game so no point in correcting my mistakes cus it's a fan-fic.Please note that i made a mistake in the name of my thread and can't change it now.the mistake was that there is more than 4 heroes in my story.
Chapter 1:The First Hero is Born!
One day Guill a.k.a the first hero was wandering the roads of Brightwood with his side-kick dog which he liked to call Tobi.He brought Tobi with him everywhere he goes and Tobi always obeys him.Guill and Tobi wandered off into the forest after leaving his house which was in Brightwood.
His mother had told him not to wander off but like always Guill wanders off anyways because he likes to go out on adventures like his father did when he was a hero.Anyways after Guill and Tobi go into the forest they get a surprise ambush attack by a group of bandits.But Guill wasn't scared because he had his dog Tobi with him and he knew Tobi would never run off without him.
But sadly Tobi was too scared to run run away.Guill thought Tobi and him were goners but then just when it looked like there was no hope for them Guill's mother had killed all the bandits in a split second.Guill was frozen scared and then his mother said:"Are you ok Guill?".
Guill was too shocked to answer but he was proud of his mother.From that day forward Guill promised Rose his mother that he would train harder and never leave her sight again.Later in Guill's life he made the "Guild" which was a place for heroes to do lots of things ordinary people couldn't do and then Guill became known as the Guildmaster.
Please post your comments.
And tell me what you thought about it.