A fanfic?! No way!

This is my Albion

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I've finally done it! I've actually written and completed a fanfic! It may not be a big deal to anyone else but I'm giddy :P Ah, but I'm also nervous now. I'd like to think that I don't care if anyone didn't like it or didn't bother reading it but I do. I'm a little kid when it comes to stuff like this, so please read if you have the spare time :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8534467/1/Albions-Lost-Years-The-Boy-from-Oakvale

I hope the link works :S It's a fanfic based between Fable 2 and 3. Basically, I got curious as to what had happened between games and decided to make events up ^___^ I've kept it as accurate to the current story lines as possible but if I've gotten something wrong, I'm sorry. It's a lot longer than I expected and the beginning is mostly character building (which could be seen as boring,) however it does get more interesting :)
I think that's it... End waffle and tries not to have a panic attack.
 

MazeisMaze

Rattus Rattus
That was good. Loved the dialogue. Didn't know Reaver was so seductive to little Sparrow. Also like on how you had mentions on what happened in Fable 3.
 

This is my Albion

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That was good. Loved the dialogue. Didn't know Reaver was so seductive to little Sparrow. Also like on how you had mentions on what happened in Fable 3.
Oh my!
I didn't realize anyone had noticed the thread, thank you for taking the time to read it as well as leave me feedback :D I just hope you have the patience to stick with it to the end or is that asking too much? *weak chuckle*
 

MazeisMaze

Rattus Rattus
oh ya totally. The story was very fluent and it gave Reaver a bit of a new character. When he suddenly get's hot, does that mean that Reaver is feeling something towards the queen? I not supposed to know yet, huh.
 

This is my Albion

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oh ya totally. The story was very fluent and it gave Reaver a bit of a new character. When he suddenly get's hot, does that mean that Reaver is feeling something towards the queen? I not supposed to know yet, huh.
You've made my night with kind words :D
It'll be mentioned again in a more obvious context :P
 

Steve

Administrator
Staff member
Guildmaster
Congrats on penning your first fanfic! Had a quick skim of Chapter 1 (A New Rule) - you have me most intrigued!

* bookmarks for later
 

Daniel Ray

The Wizard From The East
This is good stuff! A really solid start for a first time fanfic! :D

I noticed that you kept switching between past and present tense, so you may want to check that out. Besides that, its fantastic. Great job!

Can't wait for next Monday! God, reading fanfic again is making me want to go back to my own fanfic.
 

This is my Albion

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This is good stuff! A really solid start for a first time fanfic! :D

I noticed that you kept switching between past and present tense, so you may want to check that out. Besides that, its fantastic. Great job!

Can't wait for next Monday! God, reading fanfic again is making me want to go back to my own fanfic.
Do it :D

I have a terrible habit of doing that, a friend of mine was meant to edit that for me since he does creative writing. He's getting a telling off :P
thanks for reading it though and giving me some feedback :D
 

Daniel Ray

The Wizard From The East
Do it :D

I have a terrible habit of doing that, a friend of mine was meant to edit that for me since he does creative writing. He's getting a telling off :P
thanks for reading it though and giving me some feedback :D
Argh... its somewhere in this forum, but its incredibly messy, and I've lost the detailed plotline that I made years ago, so I need to rethink some stuff...

And you're welcome! I wish for more updates soon, but no pressure! :P
 

This is my Albion

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Argh... its somewhere in this forum, but its incredibly messy, and I've lost the detailed plotline that I made years ago, so I need to rethink some stuff...

And you're welcome! I wish for more updates soon, but no pressure! :P
I'll have to dig it up next time Im not the laptop :)

I've actually finished the entire thing. Just need a little editing which Im doing per chapter :D
 

Daniel Ray

The Wizard From The East
I'll have to dig it up next time Im not the laptop :)

I've actually finished the entire thing. Just need a little editing which Im doing per chapter :D
Awesome! That means we'll actually get to see the whole thing! :D

Mine was incredibly long, so I stopped halfway and never got back to it. Like seriously. I printed what I've written, and it was about 135 pages, and that was just a quarter of what was planned!
 

This is my Albion

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Awesome! That means we'll actually get to see the whole thing! :D

Mine was incredibly long, so I stopped halfway and never got back to it. Like seriously. I printed what I've written, and it was about 135 pages, and that was just a quarter of what was planned!
Its a pain but you could always do what i did. Have the entire thing written (not as detailed as the actual story though) and then write the full draft on the laptop and edit it by each chapter. I found with this method i could easily slip anything i wanted to add or forgot to :)
 

This is my Albion

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Funny.. I usually reading so much dialogue. I generally prefer more descriptive writing, but that was a pleasant read, well done! :D
Aw thank you for taking the time to read it and the feedback :) its always a nice surprise.
I did notice the mass of dialogue during the beginning. It'll even out itself in chapter 3 (i hope.) but i was mostly getting character and relationship building out of the way first.
I hope you decide to keep following and enjoy any future chapters :)
 
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