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A Fable story told by me

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and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?
 

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Forum-Troll;23647 said:
and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?


Funny, last time I checked you could not shoot fire and lightining from your hands, or slow down time or....I could go on, but you get it.

Last time I checked Fable wasn't reality, but a freaking game.
 
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First off, edit you posts so your not double posting. Second off, I agree with Skorms Son. Make up your own story and see if yours is any better.

Third, its a story. Its not real. Its called "artistic lisence". You can put whatever you want in your story. The laws of physics don't matter in a story. Man, some people really know how you wreck your day. Thanks a lot FourmTroll. :realmad:
 
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Don't get annoyed. That's what he wants. If anything, his stupidity is both amusing and pitiful at the same time.
 
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Forum-Troll;23647 said:
and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?

if u read the naxt chap u see that he dosent die next time make sure u have all the facts befor u think about being a samrt ***. and in the game when u are a teenager u fire a bow and use a iron sword.
 
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This is the third chapter in my book i tryed to exspand the hero into will and some basic knowlege to help him in this room he is locked in. hope u like it

CHAPTER TWO START​
WEEK OF PAIN​
I wake up in a massive amount of pain. But I don’t care I just lie in the water thinking about the day before. I wonder what has happened to Albion and my family. I stand up still half in the water and make my why to the bookshelf. I start to look through the books and I see a book called the forgotten language. I start to look at the book I se the words “hck nohc” it translates to “Join me”. I wonder why Skorn want me to “join him”? I realize this book is something I might need later. I put the book on the ground and wonder what there might be to eat in this room. I look for hours and find nothing to eat. I looked high and low but found nothing. I am at this point thirsty and start to walk over to the lake. I see something move in the water. I think “fish I never even thought about fish”. I look around me for something to catch it with. I see what looks like a stick in the corner of the room I run over and find out it’s a fishing pole. I cast my line into the water. And within a few minutes I caught a fish. I then wonder what I could use to cook the fish. I run over to the books and grab one. I look at the title “book of spells”. I toss it aside and look for a different book to use. I find “The book of Avo” this made me think my mother instantly. But I don’t have time to think of her now I start to tare pages out of the book. I put them in a pile and look for a why to start the fire. I look around the room for a flint to start a fire but I cant find one. While looking I look through the “book of spells”. I look for the spell “fireball”. I find it and look at the motions to cast the spell. I try them but nothing happens. I try again and I see a spark in my hands. I try one last time this time a very small fireball appears in my hand I toss it onto the pile of paper and hoist the fish above the fire and let it cook…

A few days later I still cant feel my shoulder that much. I practice my fireball skills most of the time. And on occasion shoot a few arrows I made from a few sticks after sharpening the tips of them. I wonder when I am going to get out of this room and what the world will be like when I get out. I yell, “ How mush longer?” I hear a voice say, “Not much longer there are still bandits out here.” Disappointed I sit down and look through some more of the Book Of Spells. It was around this time I started to learn about the difference between good and evil spells and how the effect to why the spell works. I try to use an evils spell know as “drain life” I tried using it on a wasp that flew by me. A green light of energy came flying from my hand and hit the wasp. I could feel the life force of the wasp being put into my body it started to help heal my wounds. It was the beat I had felt in days. But it all came at the cost of an innocent life of a wasp. I was my first taste of what an evil spell can do to another being. I decided not to try it again after the use of the spell I started to felt different I felt like a part of me had changed. It was about a week after the first day I was in the room and I heard the words “It is done, you may go know”………. I was free at last but what the world is like after this last week. The door opened and I see my fathers corps hung from a tree in from of me. I then realized who won this battle and what I must do…………

[FONT=&quot]END CHAPTER THREE[/FONT]
 
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They keep on getting better! If you want help with anything just hit me up, I personally am an accomplished writer by school and state standards so I could lend advice and/or ideas if needed. Just helping out another storyteller! :)
 
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fablefreak1;23684 said:
They keep on getting better! If you want help with anything just hit me up, I personally am an accomplished writer by school and state standards so I could lend advice and/or ideas if needed. Just helping out another storyteller! :)

thax for the coplement at the time i am just working on this story but i have a idea for a 2ed but it to early to get ahead of myself like that
 
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Tsuyu;23650 said:
Funny, last time I checked you could not shoot fire and lightining from your hands, or slow down time or....I could go on, but you get it.

Last time I checked Fable wasn't reality, but a freaking game.

that would require magic training which KIDS DON'T GET UNTIL THEY'VE BEEN IN THE GUILD FOR YEARS OF TRAINING
 
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Tsuyu;23650 said:
Funny, last time I checked you could not shoot fire and lightining from your hands, or slow down time or....I could go on, but you get it.

Last time I checked Fable wasn't reality, but a freaking game.

that would require magic training which KIDS DON'T GET UNTIL THEY'VE BEEN IN THE GUILD FOR YEARS OF TRAINING

darthlime101;23651 said:
First off, edit you posts so your not double posting.

well if it'll keep me from getting banned...

Second off, I agree with Skorms Son. Make up your own story and see if yours is any better.

I will have your story tommorow, ready for viewing...
Third, its a story. Its not real. Its called "artistic lisence". You can put whatever you want in your story. The laws of physics don't matter in a story.

it was more the fact it was just stupid and could of had a lot more effort put into it. if it was truely a good story I would with all honesty pay due credit.

Fable_Fan005;23670 said:
if u read the naxt chap u see that he dosent die next time make sure u have all the facts befor u think about being a samrt ***. and in the game when u are a teenager u fire a bow and use a iron sword.

Okay well that's something that should belong in the BEGINNING of the f**king story!!

Man, some people really know how you wreck your day. Thanks a lot FourmTroll. :realmad:

My pleasure.... :lol:
 

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Forum-Troll;23692 said:
well if it'll keep me from getting banned...

LOL!!

Bit late for that, isn't it?
 

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Mike398214;23760 said:
LOL!!

Bit late for that, isn't it?

:lol: touche!
 
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So what dose every one think about my story so far?
 

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f*cking awesome
 
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By Skorm it could be an award-winning novel!.........with more chapters it copuld anyway.
 

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Please avoid the double posting, do edit your posts instead, if you please.
 
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Sorry I didn't realize I could edit my posts until about a minute ago.
 

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No worries, it's an honest enough mistake. Just watch yourself in the future.
 
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